Small Copy Change, Big Conversion Spike

Testing

We spend $20 per day on Facebook ads for Gravy.

Four weeks ago, these ads were generating 6 leads a week.

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Now they’re generating 12.

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The only thing we changed was the above-the-fold copy on our website.

It used to be this:

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Old website H1 & H2

Now it’s this:

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Current website H1 & H2

In fact way back when, with our original copy, which Kale took the piss out of me about here would you believe we struggled to get 3 leads a week.

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Old old copy
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There’s some obvious marketing/copy-writing lessons here, don’t be vague, speak simply, tell people what you’ll do for them blah blah blah (which I stupidly ignored till now).

But generally, I think the more useful insight here is two-fold: → Small tweaks in the right places of a business can effect big improvements (not just to copy-writing)

→ Always be testing

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